Barbara Florio Graham

   Mentoring for Writers

FIVE FAST STEPS TO BETTER WRITING
20th anniversary edition
by Barbara Florio Graham


128 pages including a NEW supplement
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ISBN 0-9689196-2-6
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The Thomas More Institute in Montreal offers a writing course which uses this book as a text.


  fast-paced, readable, a treasury of valuable information and good ideas...
  apt examples, concise wisdom, worth getting  
(Canadian Author Magazine)


 TABLE OF CONTENTS

The Blank Page  

If you decide to enter the page...
 take something you can hold onto,
and a prism to split the light
 and a talisman that works,
 which should be hung on a chain around your neck: 
that's for  getting back.    
(Margaret Atwood, "The Page," from Murder in the Dark)

How To Use This Book

                      STEP ONE: PREPARE

                                           Essential decisions to pave the way

                                           Tapping your innate creativity 

                                           Researching                       

                                           Outlining

A writer lives in awe of words, for they can be cruel or kind,
 and they can change their meanings right in front of you.
They pick up flavors and odors like butter in a refrigerator. 
(John Steinbeck)

                    STEP TWO: DRAFT

                                          The easiest part

                                          Changing your mind

                                          Getting started

                                          Determining length 

                                          Verbal fashions

A good writer makes unlikely connections seem inevitable.
 (Sydney Lumet)

                   STEP THREE: REVISE

                                          Revising is not rewriting

                                          Letting format help rather than hinder

                                          Adding, subtracting, and rearranging

                                          When the conclusion you reach is not the one you intended

      Words are vehicles that can transport us from the drab sands to the dazzling stars.
(M. Robert Syme)

                 STEP FOUR: STRENGTHEN

                                          Verbs are the key to strengthening sentences

                                          Catching the run-on sentence

                                          Adding power to modifiers

                                          Supporting style with careful word choice

Writers make the world seem coherent.  
They decipher babble, they banish ambiguity and fluff, 
they amuse, they persuade, they convince, they entice, they inform.  
(Lawrence Jackson, Feb. 19, 1942 - June 4, 1998)

                  STEP FIVE: POLISH

                                          Avoiding the most common problems

                                          Modifier placement

                                          Agreement

                                         Words often confused

                                         Punctuation puzzlers

                                         The final check

Afterword

Catastrophe (the almost-true story about Simon Teakettle)

SELECTED RESOURCES

APPENDICES  NEW:

BIO: Barbara Florio Graham
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TIPS FOR YOUR BULLETIN BOARD

Most North Americans believe
 there are three things they do better than average:  
drive, sing, and write.  
Actually, most drive better than they sing,
sing better than they write, and don't drive all that well.
(Simon Teakettle)

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